Writing Tips from the Blogosphere #1

Friends often ask me whether I have read books on how to write for children and I have to confess that I have only read one, Pamela Cleaver’s Writing a Children’s Book: How to Write for Children and Get Published , which is concise and pretty good for starting
out.

But I do regularly read blogs by writers and agents and anonymous children’s editors. I got onto blogs when I was hunting for advice on how to write a book synopsis (if you are like me, a chill will run up your spine at the mention of synopsis).

You can, however, learn how to write a good synopsis and be entertained at the same time. I always enjoy agent Nathan Bransford’s blog and his guide to writing synopses is informative, though I tend to write shorter synopses than he recommends (mine are no more than two pages double-spaced). I also got a lot from romance writer Kathy Carmichael’s article – in fact, her examples helped me loads. I like this approach from Marg Gilks, too.

But the winner is Miss Snark, anonymous literary agent/blogger, whose Crap-o-meter series of synopses, first pages, hooks and cover letters is the place to go if you need a belly laugh and some learnin’ at the same time. Miss Snark, who no longer blogs, but mercifully has left her punditry up for posterity, used to put out a call for entries and be inundated with people’s synopses, which she would then dissect in red ink. Read and learn. Once you have gone through about 20 of them you will begin to get it. View Miss Snark’s Synopsis Crap-o-Meter here, and do read the other entries on her right-hand menu for further erudite observations on life, publishing and George Clooney.

My other fave anonymous blogger is Editorial Anonymous, a children’s editor whose wit is up there with Miss Snark’s. Don’t miss her right hand side panel for further hilarity and links to other very good blogs and sites.

There is also Scotland based novelist Nicola Morgan, who is giving us all a reason not to do our work and read her publishing blog instead. She is doing a series on writing skills and has just covered voice and pace. But there is oh so much more to be entertained by, not least her witty take on the writer’s life.

Last, but by no means least, is Patrick Ness’s Writer in Residence blog for Booktrust. Not only does Patrick’s blog talk frankly about his own experiences as the award-winning writer of The Knife of Never Letting Go and The Ask and the Answer, but he does a pithy series of writing tips. Check out Patrick’s website, too, for more insights.

Synopsis, synopsis, synopsis! Hey look, no chills. You, too, can learn how to write one and have a bit of writerly fun at the same time.

Back from Arvon

An inspirational week at Totleigh Barton in Devon


Totleigh Barton Sketch by Teresa Flavin

Totleigh Barton by Teresa Flavin


I disappeared off the radar last week to attend in a five day Arvon residential writing course in deepest rural Devon and I am still buzzing from the amazing time I had. Not only was the setting spectacular (an ancient thatched-roof manor house to sleep and eat in, a wattle and daub style barn to work in, and plenty of lowing cattle all around to provide the soundtrack), but the company was second to none. There were sixteen participants from all over England (I got to represent Scotland), each one passionate about writing books for children. When you are used to working in a solitary way most of the time, being with others who share your enthusiasm and sense of humour is a pretty heady experience. We could not have asked for more organised and switched-on tutors in the form of Julia Green and Steve Voake, both highly accomplished children’s writers who also teach on Bath Spa University’s MA course in Writing for Young People. It was fantastic to watch participants’ writing evolve and confidence grow in such a short time.

My writing desk


One of the high points of the week was an evening visit by Tim Bowler. I was mesmerised by Tim’s impassioned talk and the beautifully nuanced readings he gave. It is a long time since I felt as transfixed by someone and as riveted to his words. Several times he referred to “the whisper in his head”, the urge to tell a story that cannot be pushed aside or ignored. This intensity is what gives his books their edginess and pace as well as their detailed sense of place. I very much recommend Tim’s books for teenagers, especially Frozen Fire and River Boy.
My suitcase was jammed with a few signed copies of Steve and Julia’s books when I left. I am currently enjoying Steve’s debut, The Dreamwalker’s Child,and Julia’s recent book, Hunter’s Heart. Her current book, Breathing Underwater,is a very moving story with a stunning setting and I highly recommend it.
Arvon courses are very popular and sell out quickly, so if you are interested in joining one, the best way is to sign up to their mailing list so you are ready to go when next year’s courses are announced in January. I was lucky enough to get the last free place on my course!

Parade Artists Spring Sale

Original artworks and crafts direct from the people who made them!

Parade Artists, the collective of artists and makers resident in the WASPS Factory, Glasgow, are holding their second annual Spring Sale in the Gallery at 77 Hanson Street on Saturday, May 16 from 11am to 5pm and Sunday the 17th from noon to 4pm. For more information, click here. This is an opportunity for you to buy directly, and at the best prices, from artists and craftspeople. And, seeing as we’re due for more wet and windy weather here in Glasgow, I can’t think of a better way to spend an afternoon.

Book News

Two pieces of news have given me a warm glow this week.

Ever so often I receive a lovely package from Margaret K. McElderry Books in New York containing a copy of the latest printing of You Have to Write by Janet Wong and illustrated by me. The accompanying letter always lets me know which reprinting we are on. I was pleased to find out that You Have To Write is on its eleventh printing! All credit to Janet for her excellent text and to McElderry Books for their support.

The other good news is from Scholastic Children’s Books about WOW! 366: Speedy Stories in Just 366 Words, an anthology that includes Yellow Rabbit, my very short story about the adventures of a stuffed rabbit left behind in a hotel by its young owner. All the contributors to the book, including such luminaries as Michael Morpurgo, Roddy Doyle, Charlie Higson and Anne Fine (as well as Monty Python’s Terry Jones) donated their stories and a hefty percentage of sales goes to Childline, a telephone helpline for children run by the NSPCC. The nice news about WOW! 366 is that it has been selected for the 2009 Booked Up programme, funded by the government and administered by Book Trust. 600,000 eleven year olds in the UK will be able to choose one book from the list of twelve Booked Up selections and keep it. I feel honoured to be part of such a worthwhile programme!

Gayle Forman and Carmen Reid in Glasgow

Ever since I was chomped by the writing bug, I have made it my business to attend as many author appearances and read as much children’s fiction as I can. It’s all part of acquainting myself with the writing side of the children’s and young adult book industry. And anything that involves venturing out of the creative cave and into bookstores, libraries and literary festival tents is dandy with me.

This week brought a two-for-one bonus event when both Gayle Forman and Carmen Reid were hosted by the West of Scotland Children’s Book Group at Glasgow’s Mitchell Library. Gayle is over here from New York touring in support of her bestselling novel If I Stay. I hesitate to write much about the plot for fear of spoiling it for you, but suffice to say it is about twenty-four hours in the life of seventeen-year old Mia who faces an existence-altering decision. Hearing Gayle describe how Mia’s character evolved and how she felt chosen to tell her story resonated with me and probably every other writer in the room. One does feel that characters surface from the ether and suddenly you are compelled to work with them.

Carmen Reid is already well known for her so-called “chick lit” books, but her new series of St Judes boarding school stories is making inroads with children aged eleven and up. A former boarder herself, Carmen spoke about the continuing popularity of this setting and how the absence of parents opens up the possibility of adventures that might not happen if the characters lived at home under parental eyes.

New Girl (Secrets at St Jude’s) is the first book in the series about LA girl Gina being packed off to a Scottish boarding school and guaranteed culture clash, new girlfriends and various permutations of boys. Judging by the young fans Carmen had in the audience (no, it wasn’t just us zealous grown-ups hungry for inspiration) and their excitement about the next book, she’s onto a winner.

And as if we weren’t already impressed, Gayle announced that If I Stay is to be made into a film directed by Catherine Hardwicke of Twilight fame. Gayle spoke of her suprise when her agent first suggested the novel could be made into a film, because of the way it is organised into short sections moving back and forth over time, but that she was delighted with the screenplay. One thing she was not so delighted with, but refreshingly honest about, was a book project she recently spent months on and then decided to shelve because it just wasn’t working for her.

Both Gayle and Carmen across as approachable and straightforward. I left with a couple of their signed books under my arm and they will be added to my growing and eclectic list of Books To Read.

New Website Gallery

I have been hard at work on my website recently, upgrading some functions and modernising it a bit. My recent Dreamweaver training is starting to make sense. It has been a bit of a learning curve but I am getting my brain around it and looking forward to learning even fancier stuff to put on my site. With the invaluable help of webmaster Malcolm, I have a slick new slide show format on my Portfolio and Gallery webpages, and some new work to show. I was grinning from ear to ear when I finally got those pages right. I love “Ah-hah!” moments.

The Robert Burns Banner Project

For those of you reading this from outside Scotland, the poet Robert Burns may be vaguely familiar from high school or college literature classes, as he was to me. Only when I moved to Scotland did I find out what a superstar Burns is in this country and to people all over the world who celebrate his January 25 birthday every year with a Burns Supper.

There are lots of activities happening in Scotland this year to celebrate Burns’s 250th birthday and one that has caught my attention is artist Stephen Raw’s Burns Banner Project.

Stephen is collecting handmade letters to make up selected verses of the Burns poem and song “A Man’s a Man for A’ That”. You can read the poem or hear it read and sung here, or take a look at this annotated version that has links to a glossary. Burns wrote in the Scots language, which has fantastic words to get your tongue around. You’ll be able to guess the meaning of some words: the abbreviated “‘a that” stands for “all that” and “hing” is “hang”. “Gie” is “give”…a word you hear every day in Glasgow! You’ll also hear “hamely”, which means “homely”.

The Burns Banner Project is coming to WASPS Studios in Glasgow on May 12, so if you are in the area, come by between 11am and 7pm and make your own letter. It might just be chosen.

But you don’t have to attend a workshop to submit a letter – check out other ways you can do so here. And check out the blog to see what others around the world have already made.

Bluebell Heaven

Happy May Day!

Every year I am moved by the reappearance (and reassurance) of spring’s return. In late winter the crocus and snowdrops promise the end of the snow, cold and dark times. Glasgow’s temperate climate means we see oceans of daffodils in early March, if not even a bit earlier, and then the time of tree blooming begins. Roads are lined with cotton-candy pink canopies over the fading banks of daffodils.
But to me, nothing is as glorious as the bluebell. By May the grass in certain places is carpeted with them. Ever since I saw the bluebell knolls in the Merchant-Ivory film, Howard’s End, I longed to see them for myself.
I got my reward when I moved to Scotland. Our garden blooms with them each year. But better than that, there are places so full of bluebells, I make a pilgrimage to see them whenever I can.

My top three bluebell places near Glasgow:

1. Inchmahome Priory. This small island in the Lake of Menteith is magical, not only for its ruined priory, but for its giant twisted trees and bluebell carpets. To get to the island you must wait for a boat to come and pick you up, if it is not already there. There is something enthralling about this. You feel almost like you are waiting for Charon the boatman to take you across the river Styx.

Inchmahome Woods by CS

Inchmahome Woods by CS

The path around the island twists and turns. The bluebells beckon you in, mysterious and seemingly infinite. The contrast of the bright green moss on the tree trunks and the blue violet of the flowers creates a sort of electricity to the eye, even on a moody day.

Once you have walked around the island, which does not take too long, explore the ruins. Look especially for the carved stone faces looking down from the five tall “lancet” windows in the eastern end of the priory church. And in the chapter house, you will find thirteenth and fourteenth century carved gravestones and effigies of the earls of Menteith.

2. Mugdock Country Park. This sprawling park is also a conduit to the West Highland Way, a walking trail that leads all the way to Fort William in the north. Mugdock Country Park’s woods are blanketed with bluebells at this time of year. My heart beats faster when I walk through. The colour makes the forest floor blue for such a short time and I want to drink it in before it’s faded.

3. The M8 westbound, by the Glasgow Cathedral exit. This is my most humble recommendation, but worthy nonetheless. As you drive west on this three lane highway, glance up at the hillside to your right and you will see patches of rogue bluebells, toughened by their exposure to the rough and tumble M8. Maybe they’re not quite as delicate, maybe not quite as enchanted, but they are there, and they might just lift the heart of the person who bothers to look for them.